Reviewer: vincenthugo Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/07/2010 10:02 pm Title: Chapter 12

I like that Lar'ragos has a calm and cool and emotional savvy that is typical of an El Aurian; it is useful for any crew and ship. And I'm glad that Ramirez is not afraid to talk to him openly about her troubles. It looks like she is learning how deal with with some of the scary things that can happen under your command.

Those SWIFTs are neat! That's something I would really be interested in seeing somewhere. You should design it.

Author's Response:

Pava can be a terrific sounding board for his comrades when he's got his head on straight.  Ramirez is indeed learning some brutal truths about the burdens of command, things she's going to have to make peace with over time.

Glad you liked the SWIFT's!  I thought they were pretty cool too. :-)

Reviewer: CaptainSarine Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/04/2009 02:26 am Title: Chapter 12

I have to say this is as good if not better than a lot of current star trek novels. You have a real talent for choosing the right words to quickly and efficiently describe what you want to and your action scenes are great.

I loved the banter between Lar'ragos and the Klingon commander, as well as the TacNet you described.

Another strong chapter. Now I have to move on and finish!

Author's Response:

Thanks for the kind words!  Much obliged.