Date: 07/23/2010 10:14 pm Title: Chapter 9
Yikes! There goes the Pheonix...things are starting to get ugly. Interesting move by Sandhurst, and I'm glad the Gibraltar is still standing.
Author's Response:
Yeah, after this whole mess those Starfleet personnel fortunate enough to get through this should be awarded 'I Survived Lakesh' T-shirts. ;-)
Thanks for the feedback!
Date: 12/18/2009 03:56 pm Title: Chapter 9
That was a brillant battle scene. Bravo, bravo. Loved every minute of it.
Author's Response:
Thanks, I'm pleased you enjoyed it. What's not to like about dueling starships and a healthy dose of fear and desperation? ;-)
[Report This]Date: 10/20/2009 06:29 am Title: Chapter 9
Wow! What a fantastic action chapter. Loved the tricky solution that Sandhurst used, though not sure how happy Starfleet are going to be at the fact he just destroyed one of their ships...
Author's Response:
Well, Sojourner was pretty much a complete wreck anyway, and I think Starfleet will understand the logic of sacrificing one ship to save another, rather than lose both.
Thanks for commenting.
Date: 08/22/2009 06:13 pm Title: Chapter 9
Wow, that was an intense battle. I really liked Faltyne a lot here. And Sandhurst was clever, sending the Sojourner on a collision course.
Author's Response:
Sometimes pure desperation breeds brilliance. Faltyne is an interesting character, and he certainly deserves better than he got in this circumstance.
Date: 08/11/2009 08:28 pm Title: Chapter 9
Sandhurst's desperate gambit is one worthy of captains with twice his experience. Well played!
Author's Response:
Thank you! I thought it straddled the line between inspiration and desperation. ;)
[Report This]Date: 02/18/2009 05:37 pm Title: Chapter 9
Leave it to an Engineer!
Well paced and exciting, this chapter was still able to add to the depth of your characters even in the midst of all the action. Excellent!
Author's Response:
Much obliged, I'm glad that shown through.
Date: 02/18/2009 11:49 am Title: Chapter 9
Extremely nice gambit on Sandhurst's part! I was grinning like the cat holding the canary when I saw what his plan was. Feel badly for the loss of the Phoenix, but am not too surprised the Gibraltar was still standing. Great stuff!
Author's Response:
Thanks. Sandhurst's happy his plan worked. Surprised as hell... but happy.