Date: 07/13/2010 08:51 pm Title: Chapter 8
A mystery is afoot...curious to know how a defense against the dimensional shift transporter was put in place. Even more curious that it was constructed by someone from the Federation. Hmmm...maybe some involvement from Section 31?
Good for Ramirez for keeping Faltyne in check! She's got some command blood in her.
Author's Response:
Well, I could tell you who's involved but then they'd have to... well, you know. ;-)
And yes, Ramirez definitely has the chops for command. Faltyne would be ill-advised to underestimate her.
[Report This]Date: 11/30/2009 01:59 am Title: Chapter 8
What a trial of fire for a crew that (on the surface) are really not prepared for it!
Fortunate then that the new Captain has a solid senior staff. Even Ramirez seems to be pulling her weight despite her earlier reservations.
Excellent writing, wonderfully paced, and a crew I can believe in.
STILL READING!!!
Author's Response:
I'm glad you're enjoying the story. :-) Yes, it's quite true that neither the crew planet-side or those in orbit were prepared to be baptized in a trial-by-fire quite so quickly after arriving at Lakesh. Damn impolite of the insurgents, if you ask me!
[Report This]Date: 10/15/2009 08:16 am Title: Chapter 8
Stranger and stranger... So who in the Federation would put that on there without warning them? Or is it someone else?
I like the way you reveal the Cardassian plans, now all we have to do is wait and see everything blow up in their faces... I hope! :)
Author's Response:
Who indeed? ; )
The Cardassian insurgent movement has a lot ridiing on this operation, making Gibraltar and Phoenix bigger targets than ever.
Thanks again for the terrific feedback!
[Report This]Date: 02/17/2009 04:16 pm Title: Chapter 8
Sam...you have a true talent for building an during tension in your scenes. Brilliantly done sir.
Author's Response:
Many thanks! :-)
Date: 02/17/2009 11:35 am Title: Chapter 8
Fascinating turn of events, with the Klingon presence and the mystery device being diciphered little by little. It does beg the question of, "Why not the Phoenix?"
Author's Response:
I believe it's because the crew of Phoenix fell behind on paying their insurance premiums... but that's just a theory. ;-p