Date: 07/07/2010 09:55 pm Title: Chapter 7
I like Ramirez’ frustration with the circumstances as she puts it in the context of her life and aspirations. She's fast becoming one of my favorite characters in your series. And now she's got a command.
Good luck, Ramirez!
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading and commenting... and as for the luck, thanks again, she's going to need it.
[Report This]Date: 10/15/2009 05:35 am Title: Chapter 7
Sorry it has taken me so long to read more of this! However, what a great chapter to pick up on again! The fact that all of the people from Phoenix are stuck in some kind of paralysis is terrifying, and the fact that Ramirez is now assigned as acting CO of the ship is a great twist at the end!
Excellence!
Author's Response:
Thank you. : ) Ramirez has always wanted a command of her own, though not necessarily under these circumstances. And the new Cardassian insurgent weapon is terrifying indeed, most especially to its victims.
Date: 08/22/2009 06:05 am Title: Chapter 7
That bio-weapon is some horrifying stuff.
Author's Response:
It is indeed.
Date: 08/11/2009 07:48 pm Title: Chapter 7
Plots within plots. I'm extremely curious about the device siphoning power that inadvertently saved the Gibraltar crew from sharing the fate of their Phoenix counterparts.
The Cardassian insurgents are chilling and well written. I had to laugh about the dirty rifle barrel. In a world where energy weapons are standard, I can see people making that mistake, but it's a bad one to make!
Date: 02/17/2009 11:35 am Title: Chapter 7
"Their autonomic systems continued to function. Heartbeat, respiration, digestion all uninterrupted by the viral contagion visited upon them. But all neural paths to their voluntary muscle groups had been destroyed by the pathogen. They were unable to move their heads or limbs, their eyes could not focus, they could not speak."
Oh, shit. Man, talk about pulling no punches and no honor in warfare.
Date: 02/16/2009 07:17 pm Title: Chapter 7
It's official. Ramirez Rocks.
Author's Response:
I think so, too. :-D