Date: 06/30/2010 08:49 pm Title: Chapter 5
The Federation is in a real tricky situation with the Cardassians, it seems like. On the one hand, they're remarkably active and dedicated in their relief missions, but on the other getting pummeled left and right. Tough luck; the good guys never seem to catch a break. A dark and realistic portrait of Cardassia.
Ooh - the dimensional-shift transporter - haven't seen that in a while. Nice to see it back. Ah yes, I remember the genetic damage that it causes. At least it doesn't turn the users into salamanders:)
Author's Response:
Starfleet is caught in the unenviable position of being both peackeepers and humanitarian relief workers, both of which make them valid targets to the Cardassian resistance. And you're very correct, they are getting pummeled from all sides.
And though the dimensional-shift transporter won't turn you into a Voyager-esqu salamander, it can do plenty of damage nonetheless.
[Report This]Date: 09/18/2009 08:01 am Title: Chapter 5
Wow! Hugely intense. Really well-written, you've really created a tense situation here. And the secret weapon does not bode well... At all!!!!
Author's Response:
Glad you enjoyed it. As for tension, there's more on the way...
Date: 08/11/2009 07:21 pm Title: Chapter 5
Tension and casualties continue to mount. Although I don't think anyone expected the mission to be a cake walk, I doubt they foresaw this! This was yet another riveting chapter.
Author's Response:
No plan ever survives contact with the enemy, but getting jumped minutes after beaming down... that's a bit raw for a crew of rookies and malcontents. ;)
Date: 06/22/2009 11:07 pm Title: Chapter 5
WHOA. Man, pain and suffering abound here. Poor Starfleet folks, got pummeled in the opening round here.
I'm hoping Pava and the away team get some help, but man, I don't see a lot of good coming soon.
Date: 02/14/2009 01:25 am Title: Chapter 5
Talk about a warzone. Very realistically handled!