[Report This]Date: 02/22/2010 12:37 am Title: Chapter 4
This is simply great so far! It is an example of what I've always hoped for in a published novel and so very rarely found. Excellent grasp of setting. The shipboard details, so important to Star Trek and so often lacking in most stories, are both omnipresent and unobtrusive. I LOVE it!
Author's Response:
Thank you for reading and commenting! :-) I'm pleased you're enjoying the story so far, as well as appreciating the level of detail I strove for with this tale.
Date: 09/15/2009 09:03 am Title: Chapter 4
Another great chapter - I love the way you introduced each of the characters, giving Captain Sandhurst a chance to interact with almost all of them before the meeting started. Very well done!
Author's Response:
Thanks! It was clearly not the best of circumstances given their mission profile, but at least they were able to have a briefing together prior to reaching the colony.
Date: 05/28/2009 12:08 am Title: Chapter 4
And Sandhurst strikes! I like the characters and the way Sandhurst briefly goes over their history. Pleased me to no end to see he and Pava have a nice friendly convo.
Looks like the crew is getting ready and I look forward to their adventure.
Date: 02/14/2009 12:26 pm Title: Chapter 4
And that strange yet wonderful tick that Sandhurst has for command comes into play. Great way of introducing us to some new characters and they're incredibly real foundations Sam!
Author's Response:
I'm glad you enjoy the players in my story. I hope you like where the tale heads.
Date: 02/14/2009 01:25 am Title: Chapter 4
You've got a pretty good mix of people, it seems, to start off with the senior staff -- no perfect folks, but strengths and weaknesses. Juneau looks really interesting at the moment, but then again, 'problem children' usually are. I also like how you noted that the horrors of war no longer have the same impact on Sandhurst they once did.
Continually good work!