Date: 21 Aug 2013 20:24 Title: Equilibrium
I read this one on the forums, but still like it. Decent atmospheric work. Ah, Doug, trying to explain the entanglements of adults really isn't gonna work on a little boy who just wants his mother. And again, I like that they give him this. It's easy to get caught up in the flow of life and forget that our children need us so much, especially as they get older and more independent.
I want their happy ending to not just be about them as a couple, but to be, also, about them as parents. It's so easy to just write the sex and all, but there are responsibilities, too, with happily ever after. And to write a little boy's perfect dream, that was irresistible. Thank you.