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Reviewer: FalseBill Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Sep 2013 07:09 Title: Bribery

Interest scene to show what this Calafan family was like in the past and also helps to show Polloria despite being named a delicate serving girl of Lo, always has had a dark heart overfilled with ambition shown by her attempting to bribe the children to like her. Still good to show even at a young age they prepare to throw the gifts in a hole and then claim to have lost them.

Author's Response:

This is the background, on the Calafan end, for some of what happens in Reversal. Here are these children who are being pulled along with their father's infidelity. They know it's wrong, and this is the only way that they can protest it.

Reviewer: SLWalker Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Aug 2013 00:46 Title: Bribery

Ohhhhhh, those poor sweethearts. Man, I dob't blame them at all for being upset, and they quite quickly put it together, too. Ouch. Well done.

Author's Response:

This little time with Polloria is going to bite everyone in the ass later.

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