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Reviewer: FalseBill Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Oct 2013 23:03 Title: The Conspiracy

So Hoshi family is under threat as Hoshi has play to many people to often.
Seems that a small cabal has big plans but can they actually trust each other, even for the sake of their children, the plan has some merit but I can help feel something has been overlooked by the conspiraciers.

Still you’ve as always done a good job of selecting the right characters and giving them believable reasons for joining the cabal and try to use their pool knowledge information. I’m surprise they can see the risk in Hoshi plan in punching a hole into another universe more then Hoshi does.

Another got story let see how their trip from the frying pan to the fire goes.

Author's Response:

Things are never easy with the Empress. This is why she had kids with different fathers; she's created obligations and issues where they would not have otherwise existed. Thank you for reading!

Reviewer: TemplarSora Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Sep 2013 19:54 Title: The Conspiracy

Ooo, so dangerous.

Conspiracies seem to be the norm in the MU, always people trying to do what they can to not get caught before they can undermine those above them. With everyone out to drive a knife in the back of everyone else, it's no wonder you have to be so secretive about your doings. Especially with a large group of people involved; the more people, the more risk you take getting caught. And what a bold plan, too. Trying to not only get away from the Empress, but to take the children they sired as well? That's definitely going to be a huge blow to her reign and her legacy.

And that is a LOT of children in a short amount of time. I I feel bad enough for my own wife, and we had two 17 months apart. This just seems...I mean, yeah, she's bat shit nuts, but come on. I'm sure Trojan is still a thing in the 22nd century, lol. C'mon you're just really crazy.

Once again, a great addition to the lore, and definitely a neat jumping off point to see how this conspiracy affects the Empire.

Author's Response:

Well, she started late, so she wants to make up for that. It's her plan - lots of kids, someone's bound to be her successor.

But in later years, well, let's just say this is not kind to her body.

Thanks for the review!

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