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Reviewer: TemplarSora Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Sep 2013 09:55 Title: Detroit Rock City

Wow...not a great end to Loomis. Granted, probably better than going to jail, at least for him. I always found it funny when characters like Loomis get rolled up on and start telling the truth...but it's so unbelievable the cops are just like "yeah yeah, and I'm the King of England." He's telling the truth, and it's getting him in a jail of sorts, but he's not actually being punished. And he was a definite sleaze ball in the episode, so the talking about the broom closet fit pretty well with the rest of the character.

Another fun read!

Author's Response:

Thank you - I figured he ended up at One Flew Over the Cuckoo's Nest, but slightly nicer. Slightly.

Reviewer: SLWalker Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Aug 2013 22:26 Title: Detroit Rock City

Ha! I imagine there is a longer story somewhere about this, but as a standalone vignette, it's definitely a good introduction. I am guessing maybe the HGWells people? Maybe? But really, who knows?

Author's Response:

He might get revisited - Loomis is one weird dude, for sure. 

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