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Reviewer: FalseBill Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Sep 2013 05:18 Title: Penicillin

Clever Lili, so she is the keeper of the ship personal secrets and even such a fantastic cook that she manages to provide all those dishes as cover for her giving Jay some Penicillin.

They’re times that reading Lili adventures I get hungry and would love to try some of her fantastic sounding cooking, which I think is a credit to the effort and thought you put into writing her cooking and meals.

Still I think Lili was right in the corridors and Jay is wrong about needing to appear strong. I mean spreading the illness around the ship by not alert the good Doctor.

Still it’s Lili O’Day to the rescue again.

Author's Response:

Whenever we have an Ad Astra con, I promise I will cook! :)

The thing about this incident is, Jay remembers it at the end of his life.

Reviewer: SLWalker Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Aug 2013 00:06 Title: Penicillin

Hayes was a bit over the top early on there, more like he was reciting lines than saying them, but it smoothed out nicely by the end and I want Lili to make me some soup too, dangit.

Author's Response:

This I do know how to make. :)

He remembers this at the end of his life.

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