Date: 03 Jun 2012 19:21 Title: Chapter 1
I really liked this story. Mixie goes through hell and you do a great job of destroying her piece by piece. It's a sadistic situation with a sadistic outcome (until the end). You write Dukat very well and you have a knack for exposing his contradictions: caring lover in one hand, a crazy sadistic control freak in the other.
It was good fun to read and you created a character I actually cared about. So good job toying with this reader's emotions; like a good writer should!
Author's Response: Hehe, never before has it been a compliment for someone to say that toying with emotions is good! Usually it's "You man-eating $&@^*!!" Thank you so much, I'm glad you enjoyed it! I really like Mixie because she's stronger than she thought. And, this'll be something that has made her stronger and better later on. Thanks so much for your compliments!