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Reviewer: BorgDominant Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 02 Sep 2011 19:36 Title: A Child's Toy

Man this story is getting exciting!! Pow home run Rob. I can't wait to see what happens next. Love it, love it, love it.

Reviewer: Ln X Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 02 Sep 2011 11:43 Title: A Child's Toy

Woah! Seriously good, and I really dig that picture of the planet exploding. This may sound stupid but I saw the top half of the image and just sort of ignored it.

And then when it came to the 'Mehjah'Loh, the entire planet that it was, exploded!' part. I looked down and was like awesome!. That was one amazingly placed picture.

p.s. please can I go over the chapters and correct the occasional minor mistakes that crop up from time to time? Because I saw half a dozen mistakes in this chapter. I know you four are all busy writing so won't have the time to go over the story. Just a thought you know...

p.p.s Where did you get that picture from? Was a shot from the Star Trek series, or was it digitally made? And if so who made it?

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