Reviewer: Jean-Luc Picard Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Sep 2011 08:43 Title: Chapter 1

Heh. Pretty good intro. I kinda forgot how Malcolm had all those medical problems. It doesn't rule out that he may have been lactose intolerant. Nice to see how the NX-01 crew is not above peer pressure. ;)

Author's Response:

Thanks! He starts off as really fussy in this one - I wanted to get him at his most OCD-I-won't-touch-that-thing-you-couldn't-possibly-pay-me-enough.

And, a little juvenile behavior (and more later) ....